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Sat Jan 19, 2008 1:23 pm
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I already have four chapters but...
CHAPTER ONE -
It was an ordinary day at at collage. The bell rang i went to class and sat there. The teacher called on me and i simply guessed "71?" i said. "Correct" said Miss Hanagan. "PHEW" i thought to myself, what luck was that. Just then i heard my new J-Mobile Sidetrack 3 vibrating. I waited for the bell to ring signaling the school day was over. Then i grabbed my new pink Roxie backpack and headed out the door. Just then i remembered the text ide recieved in math class. It was from Brent, Brent has been my boyfriend for almost 5 years now, tommorrow was our 5th year and he was everything a girl could ever ask for. I waited until i got on the bus to read the text message.
What did the text say? Was it good or bad? |
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Sat Jan 19, 2008 1:26 pm
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| lol nice! are you gonna include ppl from here too? |
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Sat Jan 19, 2008 1:27 pm
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| nope, i already wrote it like a long time ago in 4th grade. |
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PEAR MEMBER: Pickle, Emily, Arly, Rawn-Tawn. REPRESENT!
i gots me .43723e=mc238034 ghetto points |
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Sat Jan 19, 2008 3:34 pm
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| EmmaHeelz wrote: | I already have four chapters but...
CHAPTER ONE -
It was an ordinary day at at collage. The bell rang i went to class and sat there. The teacher called on me and i simply guessed "71?" i said. "Correct" said Miss Hanagan. "PHEW" i thought to myself, what luck was that. Just then i heard my new J-Mobile Sidetrack 3 vibrating. I waited for the bell to ring signaling the school day was over. Then i grabbed my new pink Roxie backpack and headed out the door. Just then i remembered the text ide recieved in math class. It was from Brent, Brent has been my boyfriend for almost 5 years now, tommorrow was our 5th year and he was everything a girl could ever ask for. I waited until i got on the bus to read the text message.
What did the text say? Was it good or bad? |
umm you mean college :S |
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Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:58 pm
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:03 am
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Chapter Two
The text message read;
BRENT: Meet me at my house tommorrow morning at sunrise, i have to work today but trust me...the surprise is awesome.
I quickly sent him a reply saying ide go and yadda yadda yadda. My best friend/roomate Roxanne and I sat by each other and talked about what his surprise could be. She said "Hey Carly wanna chill out at the mall today?" "Sure!", I replied. "we'll skate there at eight". Me (Carly), Brent, and Roxanne absolutely LOVED to skateboard. It's all we ever did and talked about. The bus came to a stop me and Roxanne got off "Thanks for the ride" i said. I skated to my dorm with Roxanne, did my homework, ate, and got ready.
What is Brent's surprise for Carly? Will she like it?
Chapter Three
I grabbed my purse and said "Roxanne you ready?" She was silent. She was on her bed lying there.... again i shouted "ROXANNE YOU READY?"....nothing... I shook her, still no reaction. I felt her forehead-it was cold, she looked really pale. I drapped a warm cloth over her and called an R/A. The R/A helped me while we called 911 for help. The ambulence came and took Roxanne. They told us that there probably wasnt much they could do except give her major sugary.
Is Roxanne okay? Will she survive? What caused her to suddenly have that happen? |
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 6:48 pm
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I like the "cliffhanging" at the end.
Adds a nice touch. |
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seth1230™: im on a boat and
HannahHeelz: it's going fast and
heelingforlyfe™: i've got a nautical themed, pashmina afghan
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:03 pm
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| EmmaHeelz wrote: | | nope, i already wrote it like a long time ago in 4th grade. |
cause you totally didnt get j-mobile sidetrack 3 from the sidekick3 which wasnt out 3 years ago. |
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:45 pm
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| seth1230™ wrote: | | EmmaHeelz wrote: | | nope, i already wrote it like a long time ago in 4th grade. |
cause you totally didnt get j-mobile sidetrack 3 from the sidekick3 which wasnt out 3 years ago. |
Wat if she just added it? |
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Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:26 pm
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| hidude28 wrote: | | seth1230™ wrote: | | EmmaHeelz wrote: | | nope, i already wrote it like a long time ago in 4th grade. |
cause you totally didnt get j-mobile sidetrack 3 from the sidekick3 which wasnt out 3 years ago. |
Wat if she just added it? |
well, figure of speech. i think it was like.... summer of last year? i just wanted to emphisise. XD. but yeah... still... long long agoo |
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Tue Jan 22, 2008 6:28 pm
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| EmmaHeelz wrote: | | hidude28 wrote: | | seth1230™ wrote: | | EmmaHeelz wrote: | | nope, i already wrote it like a long time ago in 4th grade. |
cause you totally didnt get j-mobile sidetrack 3 from the sidekick3 which wasnt out 3 years ago. |
Wat if she just added it? |
well, figure of speech. i think it was like.... summer of last year? i just wanted to emphisise. XD. but yeah... still... long long agoo |
feels like vertigo was just yesterday  |
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